Recently, in our Literacy lessons, we have been trying really hard to use descriptive language. In one lesson, we described a mystery animal and hoped that the language we used would allow the reader to picture clearly the creatures we described. Can you guess what the following animals are from our descriptions? We hope you enjoy our writing.
What am I?
It climbs sneakily up vast walls.
It springs from one massive, colossal web to another.
The crazy creature has a huge, pure red patch on its fierce, black back.
Patiently, it stands in the blazing hot sun and hunts for flesh.
It is as fierce as a lion.
It lives in the deserted desert in the mighty Africa.
Would you fight a creature like this?
If you did, you’d lose!
by Bradley Mortlock
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What am I?
It moves delicately like it’s dancing through the air.
It is pink and blue and as dotty as a Dalmation dog.
It is as colourful as a rainbow.
Its wings are as fragile as a flower.
Sometimes it sleeps on a lovely green leaf to keep warm.
by Marcus Giorchino
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What am I?
It slithers like a worm in the exstremely tall, fresh, green grass.
It is as long as a coach.
It is as ferocious as a killing tiger.
It’s as smooth as silk.
Rapidly, it chases its prey which runs as fast as it can.
by Thomas Jarrett
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